I have found that orange is difficult to draw over. Not physically difficult, I mean the brightness is distracting! I got carried away toning the orange down with white ink but I’m pleased with the look overall. I do wish I could bring the orange back a little and some of the writing as well.
I want to rework this in a larger format, partly because I like the feeling of it, and partly as an opportunity to fix the major mistake I’ve cropped out here. Where the shoulder connects to the arm, connecting to the elbow, connecting to the forearm, to the wrist. Can I blame the mistake on the orange? It was so bright!